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Red Eyes Rising


Was Milo wrong?

  • Yes, completely wrong.

  • Milo was just trying to be a good brother.

Title: Red Eyes Rising


Logline: A calm winter afternoon turns into a disaster when two young boys come face to face with a real bloodthirsty demon.


Genre: Action, supernatural


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Great Scene 1. I like that you did not set a specific time period - the sword could imply a time ago or a future where that is the modern weapon. It gives the viewer freedom to embellish the setting in their own minds while getting hooks by the action.

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